Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-24810520-20151204182918/@comment-39.37.130.242-20170507141842

DawnKing71 wrote: Hmmmmmm

Quirk: Terraform- I can basically change the terrain in a certain area. For example, I can change the terrain of a city into a dessert, an ocean or any other terrain like mountains or canyons. It works like teleporting a terrain but where ever the original terrain went is unknown. I can also modify the terrains that I created like creating a lake around a mountain. In short, I can also overlap created terrains. The terrain creation takes only mere seconds to form and I can easily return the terrain to normal. In combat, I use a barrage of terrain creations to beat the enemy like rapidly creating an ocean or lake drowning the enemy then quickly swaps the ocean or lake terrain with glacier landscape,incasing the enemy in a terrain of ice. The range of my terrain creation is limited but can cover up quite an area. The maximum overlapping of terrain is 3-4 if more than that I start weakening and losing consciousness. The kind terrains are dependent on my knowledge about terrain. I cannot create life, but when I try to create a forest landscape, the landforms will only change and no trees or plants will be created but the created terrain is ready to sustain life so basically it's like planting. This quirk has no kind of augmentation on me so that makes me a plain old human.

That was long and my super hero name will be Terra Firma ^_^ Im sorry about me going to nitpick right now, but oh snap dude!

Firstly, you must not be aware of the fact that quirks can't be too OP or it doesnt fit.

You're essentially giving youself a GOD like power by creating terrains out of nowhere.

Also, you can't ​create ​matter, because you'd need some pre-existing matter to do anything. You can't just teleport shit to an unknown location, because then you might accidentally replace every terrain on earth eventually. Thats kind of like Theseus' ship example really.

Instead you should change your power to altering the existing landscape or transporting a landscape to the location, and the one present to the one you transporteds location.

And last but not least, I'm pretty sure you can't overlap terrains, as they form over millions of years, and that would probably cause them to negatively interact with each other.

Instead, you should probably change your quirk to alterinng terrain using an area you have been to and have full knowledge of the geographical landforms there. Also the quirk should affect an area of 25 metres squared only and can only activate when life isnt present on it. Also, if you really want some kinda overlap, you should just allow terrains to form within the area by being divided equally between the fixed area. And as a weakness, the more you use your quirk, the more you begin to suffer split concentration to the extent you are unable to perform any regular task for a full day if overused.