Talk:Yoroi Musha

Personality
"However, it is shown that he has a rather vain and cowardly personality; after the Paranormal Liberation War, when people's faith in heroes was being questioned, Yoroi chose to dodge any responsibility and resigned from his position, and his inner monologue reveals that he only wanted to be a hero so he could be loved and respected, not to help people." This section assumes a lot about the character just from one page, it automatically labels him a coward, vain and claims he does not want to help people. This description also take his inner though of "All I ever wanted... was love and respect..." to accuse him of being vain while ignoring the context of the scene were people are insulting him and calling him out for quitting showing he is neither being loved or respected at that moment due to his decision. Finally, another issue with this description is that it takes the insults he is receiving on that page as his personality instead of using what the character himself has shown. In the aftermath chapter of the PLW it was made clear that due to the death and destruction caused by it that some of the heroes couldn't handle it and quit with no reference to them being cowards, just that the events were too horrific for them to take. I think a better description would be something along the lines of "However, after the paranormal liberation war, while people's faith in the heroes was being questioned,he lack the fortitude to continue and retired." I am not the best at writting synopsis, so I'm hoping someone can write it better than me.Masgrande (talk) 22:30, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I have fixed the section, although I do believe it can be improved upon as I am also not good at writing synopses, but it is definitely better than the one we previously had.  TheNinjaOnTheTop  (talk) 08:37, 8 March 2021 (UTC)