Thread:Young Mako/@comment-24945873-20200226192614/@comment-1706203-20200226230125

Sorry if I came off as aggressive or harsh I'm just trying to be constructive. Tamaki's abilities section was just way too long and I just want you to be careful about run on sentences. Its good to reference points in fights and why that makes him strong, but please be careful not to include every detail about the fight while trying to highlight the character.

You're a very good writer but when you add on alot to an already established page with good content, it can be unesscessary. We don't to have overly large blocks of texts or a bunch of images in one section. I think you could use your skills best by adding to sections with new updates or anything that might have been missed instead of going into extra detail about everything.