Talk:Itsuka Kendo

Desboy why are you replacing more detailed information with less? the more descriptive the appearance is the better no? the one thing a agree with is she just a ginger she doesn't have strawberry blond hair although you not knowing what that is is odd in and of itself.

Littlemetzler (talk) 18:04, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

For starters I know what strawberry blonde is...lol. I was just wondering why someone would put that when she's clearly a ginger (pale skin and freckles to boot).

I changed the paragraph was I felt it could've been written better. Theres a difference between being descriptive and just using too many words. I was just changing the grammer so it reads more smoothly. There are a lot of distracting extra words that just didn't need to be there.

For example saying she wears a "corset just below her breasts"... where else do you wear a corset lol. Her hair isn't any more "spikey" in her hero costume. "She wears a light blue qipao, a black corset that goes just below her breasts, and black spats, alongside a brown utility belt". The alongside is redundant with that many commas and ands..get what I'm saying?

If you want to make it more descriptive be my guest, but do it in a way that improves the paragraph. I'm rewriting her synopsis and adding a gallery to her page later on today. THE DES 18:51, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

i agree with everything you said exce[t about the corset. Many actually cover the breasts pushing them out the top.

Littlemetzler (talk) 23:14, September 11, 2017 (UTC)